Post by Attor Nidhogg on Aug 22, 2011 2:46:00 GMT -5
I'm giving this a shot since i can never find any good Kuro RP boards,and,not sure if i'm doing this right. But I'll try
Here goes nothing~
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Name: Attor Nidhogg (Poison Glass)
Age: 700 (Looks 15)
Sex: Female
Species: Dragon Demon
Nationality: I'm throwing a guess at British
Abilities/Strengths:
Poison; Naturally if Attor means poison in dragon language you'd assume it's her main fourm of attack. Well it is,and in my opinion she does it well. Attor uses a clear poison that she can manipulate in a couple ways utilizing the poison gland in her stomach;
Transforming; It's not completely what it sounds like. Attor can gain a dragon-like tendency. But sadly it comes with a price. The price to sprout wings from her back,grow claws,fangs,and horns is such things breaking though her human skin and cause her pain as well as blood loss. Such things would grow though her fingernails and burst out of her back in a bloody mess. These "Transformations" don't last very long at all,and soon you just have a passed out girl with extensive wounds sealing themselves.
Rapid-Healing; Well not much to say about this,it's fast healing. If you have the transformations like i do,then'd you'd probably end up having this to compensate.
Inabilities/Weaknesses:
Sensitive; Even if Attor is some powerful dragon locked in a human body doesn't mean she can't get offended. In fact it's quite the opposite,Attor gets offended easily. She may give an i-really-don't-care-for-you style act. But really this dragon just wants to punch you in the face for saying whatever you said.
Language; Attor hardly knows any English no matter how hard she tries,her hoarse robust dragon-style voice box just can't produce the right tones for normal English. So she doesn't study it. She can speak perfectly in the Ancient tone of Dragons but no one know's what she means. So she just stays silent and uses facial expressions to try and communicate in the world.
Fighting; Despite having good powers at her disposal,Attor can't fight too well,but she's not completely hopeless. Moderate i suppose. Not much else to say except Attor doesn't like fighting because she's not too experienced at combat.
Judging; Not much to say here either. Attor is too quick to judge someone by how they look or talk,and she hardly trusts anyone because they all look like "Talent-less Wasps who wouldn't scream to save their own scales."
Loner; Again,self-explanatory. Then again I personally wouldn't blame her.
Occupation: Umm..i don't think hiding in dark allyways in East End counts as an occupation. Does it?
Apperence:
(Minus swords please) Over Attor's normal outfit she has a large brown robe she holds over her entire body including her head. Peering though the small hole for one of her eyes where her hands meet at her neck.
Face Claim: Unknown art,looks cool to me though
Life Story: Attor Lived a pretty normal life where she came from,but to put it basically she was framed for a genocide and her soul was forced into a human entity,then was banished to a time she knew nothing about. Back where she came from though,she was one of the few female warriors in the clan of Earth Dragons. Their was the Sky Clan, Earth Clan, Fire Clan, and Water Clan (Gee..sounds like avatar the last airbender Dx). And battled eachother for food and territory like any other species. Earth dragon's concurred large forests and caves in the sides of great mountains. Enough of that,moving on.
Sample Roleplay: Another turning of the sun,another blazing hot day even in the dark alleyways where one such as i cowers. Geez,can't the world give us a break with the fire flames? Wonder how bad it is for others? This dragon thought with a sigh. She didn't bother to stand up straight for normal days like this, preferring to stay in the shadow of a large old brick building with her legs crossed under the ugly brown cloak that made her sweat like never before. If only she had power over the weather so she could just cast a roar to the sky and make a downpour that would last for days. But that's not always the best idea,is it? For a moment she considered taking it off,no one would see her in the shadow would they? No,that's a very very VERY bad idea,Because knowing my luck i'll probably get seen anyway. With a pop of her lips the girl let her mind wander about her existence,If their's any of it left.
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GEE THAT TOOK FREAKING FOREVER x.x
And to me Attor kinda sounds like a Mary Sue,i don't have too much confidence in my abilities to write non-sueish characters. And i don't trust that one limitus test going around,because i just KNOW she'd be at least a borderline sue with that thing,It counts
my other oc's as complete sues. :/ oh well
Now i shall go murder myself for making such a bad character it hurts.
Here goes nothing~
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Name: Attor Nidhogg (Poison Glass)
Age: 700 (Looks 15)
Sex: Female
Species: Dragon Demon
Nationality: I'm throwing a guess at British
Abilities/Strengths:
Poison; Naturally if Attor means poison in dragon language you'd assume it's her main fourm of attack. Well it is,and in my opinion she does it well. Attor uses a clear poison that she can manipulate in a couple ways utilizing the poison gland in her stomach;
- Spitting it at her attacker
- Crying/Sweating/Bleeding poison (the poison is mixed within her blood)
- Spreading it on her fingers,toes and other places after coughing it up
Transforming; It's not completely what it sounds like. Attor can gain a dragon-like tendency. But sadly it comes with a price. The price to sprout wings from her back,grow claws,fangs,and horns is such things breaking though her human skin and cause her pain as well as blood loss. Such things would grow though her fingernails and burst out of her back in a bloody mess. These "Transformations" don't last very long at all,and soon you just have a passed out girl with extensive wounds sealing themselves.
Rapid-Healing; Well not much to say about this,it's fast healing. If you have the transformations like i do,then'd you'd probably end up having this to compensate.
Inabilities/Weaknesses:
Sensitive; Even if Attor is some powerful dragon locked in a human body doesn't mean she can't get offended. In fact it's quite the opposite,Attor gets offended easily. She may give an i-really-don't-care-for-you style act. But really this dragon just wants to punch you in the face for saying whatever you said.
Language; Attor hardly knows any English no matter how hard she tries,her hoarse robust dragon-style voice box just can't produce the right tones for normal English. So she doesn't study it. She can speak perfectly in the Ancient tone of Dragons but no one know's what she means. So she just stays silent and uses facial expressions to try and communicate in the world.
Fighting; Despite having good powers at her disposal,Attor can't fight too well,but she's not completely hopeless. Moderate i suppose. Not much else to say except Attor doesn't like fighting because she's not too experienced at combat.
Judging; Not much to say here either. Attor is too quick to judge someone by how they look or talk,and she hardly trusts anyone because they all look like "Talent-less Wasps who wouldn't scream to save their own scales."
Loner; Again,self-explanatory. Then again I personally wouldn't blame her.
Occupation: Umm..i don't think hiding in dark allyways in East End counts as an occupation. Does it?
Apperence:
(Minus swords please) Over Attor's normal outfit she has a large brown robe she holds over her entire body including her head. Peering though the small hole for one of her eyes where her hands meet at her neck.Face Claim: Unknown art,looks cool to me though
Life Story: Attor Lived a pretty normal life where she came from,but to put it basically she was framed for a genocide and her soul was forced into a human entity,then was banished to a time she knew nothing about. Back where she came from though,she was one of the few female warriors in the clan of Earth Dragons. Their was the Sky Clan, Earth Clan, Fire Clan, and Water Clan (Gee..sounds like avatar the last airbender Dx). And battled eachother for food and territory like any other species. Earth dragon's concurred large forests and caves in the sides of great mountains. Enough of that,moving on.
Sample Roleplay: Another turning of the sun,another blazing hot day even in the dark alleyways where one such as i cowers. Geez,can't the world give us a break with the fire flames? Wonder how bad it is for others? This dragon thought with a sigh. She didn't bother to stand up straight for normal days like this, preferring to stay in the shadow of a large old brick building with her legs crossed under the ugly brown cloak that made her sweat like never before. If only she had power over the weather so she could just cast a roar to the sky and make a downpour that would last for days. But that's not always the best idea,is it? For a moment she considered taking it off,no one would see her in the shadow would they? No,that's a very very VERY bad idea,Because knowing my luck i'll probably get seen anyway. With a pop of her lips the girl let her mind wander about her existence,If their's any of it left.
_
GEE THAT TOOK FREAKING FOREVER x.x
And to me Attor kinda sounds like a Mary Sue,i don't have too much confidence in my abilities to write non-sueish characters. And i don't trust that one limitus test going around,because i just KNOW she'd be at least a borderline sue with that thing,It counts
my other oc's as complete sues. :/ oh well
Now i shall go murder myself for making such a bad character it hurts.
